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In my opinion i think that this setting is presented in a  uncontrollable and aggressive mood. The reason i think so is because it says phrases such as “sulphurous and thought-executing fires”. And that it says at the start of the extract,”blow,winds and crack your cheeks!rage!blow!” The figurative language  that was being used for the first line was personification. The reason was because it was giving a naturalistic feature a human characteristic.When the reader is seeing this he would ponder how it would look if you could actually blow winds and crack your cheeks and that this doesn’t really sound positive and that he isn’t in a good mood.And that when he said rage he meant cause extensive damage to his political Empire. The “crack” of cheeks as well as the command of “Rage” and “Blow” help to emphasise how there is to be some level of destruction wrought at the hands of human beings to be evident.

And that is how i present king lairs extract.

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the task

Your task is to find and explain the quotation from a piece of writing to support an idea that you have about a character,setting or theme.you would read the extract from Ender’s game below and answer the question provided in a single paragraph.

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how does the author ,Orson scott card, present the character of Ender

Ender’s game by Orsons got card

Accordingto the text , the feeling that you get is that Ender is a very generous boy. However when people try to attack him he is a completely different person. Because it says in the text that “he caught one of the puncher by the arm and threw him as hard as he could. And that he butted one of the boy’s face to a helmet whilst they were screaming with blood.”

So this makes the reader feel as if Ender is not somebody you would like to mess with or bother, otherwise you are in deep trouble. But one special thing about Ender is that he doesn’t do this because he wants to but because he doesn’t like people getting on his nerves. Meaning that when people back up because they’re scared of him he feels upset and doesn’t want people to think of him in that way.

 

king Lear description

The story of king lear and his three daughters is an amazing story filled with love greed and. And so this story began with a rich and wealthy man who owned all the land in Elizabethan England. He had three daughters however he was very greedy and the only person he cared for on that planet was pretty much himself.

And the attitude that he had in the beginning of the scene rode him through a roller coaster filled with emotional times during the beginning , middle and end witch wasn’t something you would want to have been through.

Now this

my version of king lear

Open your mouth to puff out wind and leave cracks on your cheeks . blow smoke out of all of the holes in your body and again drain out all of the oxygen that has been produced in your body  and blow it out as if it was the first time you took a puff from a cigarette.

All of you humongous cataracts and twirling strong tornadoes , form and come my way. i got something i want to say. Till you have drenched our steeples, drowned the rocks. You evil and beheading extreme fires. Vaunt coriers to oak cleaving thunderbolts. Behead my white head. No matter what thunder shaking weather decides to occur. Lay down flat and thick  to the world. Crack mother natures mould for all germens spit at once  with makes and spawns that ungrateful man.  Fool.  O nuncle, court holy-water in a dry house is better than this rain-water out o’ door. Good nuncle, in, and ask thy daughters’ blessing; here’s a night pities neither wise man nor fool.

All of you humans rub your humongous stomachs and and breath out rapid oxidation .

I tax not you, you elements, with unkindness;

The cod-piece that will house
  Before the head has any,
The head and he shall louse;
  So beggars marry many.
The man that makes his toe
  What he his heart should make,
Shall of a corn cry woe,
  And turn his sleep to wake.
For there was never yet fair woman but she made mouths in a glass.         25
Enter KENt
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I never gave you kingdom, call’d you children,
You owe me no subscription: then, let fall
Your horrible pleasure; here I stand, your slave,
A poor, infirm, weak, and despis’d old man.
But yet I call you servile ministers,         20
That have with two pernicious daughters join’d
Your high-engender’d battles ’gainst a head
So old and white as this. O! O! ’tis foul.
  Fool.  He that has a house to put his head in has a good head-piece.

The cod-piece that will house
  Before the head has any,
The head and he shall louse;
  So beggars marry many.
The man that makes his toe
  What he his heart should make,
Shall of a corn cry woe,
  And turn his sleep to wake.
For there was never yet fair woman but she made mouths in a glass.         25
Enter KEN

Dear Cordeila

I sincerely apologize for what i did to you. I fully regret what i did to you and cannot imagine how embarrassed, depressed and heart broken you must of felt after what i did to you. By any means i am not trying to send a threat saying that if you do not forgive me you are in danger but that i hope you do forgive me not for banishing you as my daughter but for every other deed i have ever committed against you.

What i did to you would have been the biggest sin or mistake i have done to you and although there have been some times were i have been extremely harsh to people like you  i am not trying to get my way out of the situation but there are were it hasn’t been my fault but it was society to blame.

I understand that you might not even bother to read this but i sincerely apologize for what i did and i cannot imagine how embarrassed , pathetic,lonely and heartbroken you must have felt after i did what i did to you. Now i know i possibly wrote this for nothing , however if you are reading this then to be honest i am highly impressed from the amount of confidence you have. If i were you, by the time this letter had arrived and it said my name then i would have either set it on fire or shred it into pieces.

I don’t even  know why but   i had no choice to you know… banish .you. as my daughter. At that moment when i did what i did  the only things i thought was pretty much these things.

WOMEN

ALCOHOL

MONEY

TAXES.

These four things changed my complete personality , and trust me these personalities weren’t good. And so you should be able to guess the next part. Because all i thought about was myself i forgot all of my responsibility. It was as if Satan ate all of the good deeds and responsibilities i had to take care of. Now if you don’t forgive me that is OK however just reading this whole apology letter is just as good i guess. Humans in my opinion are actually one of the most sinful, disrespectful and evil creatures living on this planet. And so this might have been the third or second time or third but i am really sorry and in return if you forgive me you know the place. In fact i don’t even know if i should be speaking to you like that .

No matter the cost , present , food or place i will do it for you . From a gold or diamond necklace to a house  no even needing to give me those two magic words i will do it for you. For it is me needing to do the magic in order for you to forgive me. I feel so sorry for what i did to you that in return i have rented you a limo zine a watch with alligator skin and enchanted quartz encrusted emerald. I have even got all of the priests and monks in Elizabeth England to whip and punish me .

I am sorry my daughter. Love you.

KING LEAR

 

 

KING LEAR

You three come at once so thou knows who shall love thi the most. Whoever is to convince thi the most shall earn half of the land from the kingdom. Starting from Goneril and so on, all of you shall tell thi doth love us most.

Goneril

Oh my ever so magnificent lord; i love you more than words wield the matter. Dearer than eye sight,space,liberty. Beyond what can be valued rich nor rare. Though i am in a love that miraculously vanishes breath and speech. Within every living creature and object that lives on not only this planet but galaxy , i am in deep magical love.

King Lear

And so what shall the other sister of thi say to mwa?

Regan

Oh my one and ever only love ,Lear . I am in a miraculous sot of love with you my dear. My sister is a great female and would be quite a hard choice. The only problem throughout this is that only she comes to short.It should not be that hard for you my one and only lord to choose between me and my unwanted sister shant it.

King Lear

And what shall you say to draw a third more opulent than your sisters. Speak at once before you are sentenced nothing but dust.

Cordelia

My magnificent lord  i absolutely love you in a way that does not have to be explained to thi for you to understand.

King Lear

What are you trying to define to me? That i am a waste of breath for being explained to? You must speak very quickly young lady before i am to get my guards to cut your body into pork belly chops. SPEAK AT ONCE!!

Cordeila

Now my lord you are to listen to me very carefully, for you are thinking  of what i said to you as a very disgraceful comment. My one and only wealthy highness  , you should understand that no matter what you shall do to to me i will never take it as an offence. When i am to say to you that i shall have nothing to say to explain your divine intelligence , you are to take that as a compliment. I do not need to explain to you my amazing love for that will take as long as it is for you and i to lose our souls.

regan cordeila goneril . Shakespeares essay

Now this essay was suppose to be about these three sisters that fell in love with one king named lear. Now when i sal love , i don’t mean no puppy love or deep love. I sort of mean goldigga love. Whoever king lear thinks has defined their love a spectacular way will earn as much land they want from the kings kingdom. The three selfish young women do not understand the meaning of love and would rather try in a way humiliate eachother. For there is only one that is in true love. With the language shakespeare has used he tried to define each of their attitudes on the way they proposed to him and so that is the story.

isaac idris

 

 

shakespeares essay

This essay will be about how shakespeare has described the three sisters love between king lear.

Goneril

In this story i think that the way shakespeare has described Goneril is as a very false and manipulative person. An example of Goneril acting in this sort of way is when she said dearer than eyesight,space,liberty. And so this is my evidence  on what i think shakespeare was trying to describe Goneril as.

Regan

In my opinion i think that the way shakespeare presents Regan as is a two faced person. The reason i think so  is because she acts as if she would do anything for  her sister however when king comes she acts as if she would do anything for him. An example would be her saying only she comes too short. This my definition on what I think  shakespeare is trying to describe Regan as.

Cordeila

In this part of the story there is a lady called Cordeila, who is in so much love with the king that she doesn’t even need to explain to him  how much she loves him. Comparing Cordeila to Regan and Goneril is that whenever King lear would ask her ‘what now have you got to say’ she would say ‘nothing’. And so this what I think Shakespeare in my opinion was trying to define Cordeila as.

The story king lear was based and supposed to be about a man named King lear , who owns all of the land and is very rich. However there is only one problem. And that problem is that he hasn’t got a wife. And so there are three sisters that compete against each other trying to get King Lear to fall in their trap. And so as we kmow those three sisters are Cordeila,Regan and Goneril. For there is only one that has true love for King lear .

THE TOMB OF DOOM

The book the tomb of doom was written and illustrated by Tanya Landman. I will give you more information about this book but for now how about I read you the blurb? By the way that was a rhetorical question.

Dad and I were on a location in Cairo (Egypt) , filming the TOMB OF DOOM!!!!  It was awesome-pyramids,temples,mummies… and a sinister stranger following us wherever we went.

Then child star tinkerbelle cherry was struck down with a mystery illness

It was all so confusing, i thought my head would explode.

The main character is a small little boy called SAM Swann . When him and his and his dad went to egypt they were filming a movie called the tomb of doom. but when they arrived to egypt they got sick by some mummy curse. to be continued….

the operation

hello :My name is Isaac . I was born in a hospital called North Wick park hospital. Since I was born I lived a very happy life but about seven years later, that’s when my life turned to hell. As I became seven a few months later  I always sneezed and caught colds witch then made me realise that something bad is going on .

2 months later i went to the hospital and they said to me that i have a large chunk of meat from my body that went into my nose and that i had to get a operation to remove the chunk of meat. But the only problem was i wasn’t allowed to take it so i had to wait for three years witch really irritated me. As I up grew things started to get worse. When I say that things started to get worse what I meant by that is that I had trouble with breathing and, when I tried to sleep I had a lot of trouble with breathing in and out.

When I was in year 5 as I believe from year 5 and years that go after that I am supposed to take things much more seriously. When  I was ten years old I went to my nearest hospital which is called St Thomas Hospital. They gave me all sorts of medications to calm down my nose muscles but none of them really worked; in fact some of the medications made it worse. When I was ten my nose really started to annoy me but  that didn’t stop me from trying my best to revise , be active and work hard.

About two months later I had my first practice test for English, maths, science, and other subjects. Although I had this problem that didn’t decrease my chance of having a good grade and losing confidence. If you want to be honest with me I was wrong. I completely regret everything I just said in this autobiography. The test was the worst test  I have ever taken. But you know what? It wasn’t the questions that puzzled: me it was my nose.  When I was in my classroom trying to complete my maths and English test, there were so many ways my nose irritated me. I could give you a hundred examples. But the one that p*ssed me of the most was breathing. I would like you to listen carefully to what I tell you right now and imagine if it happened to you. If you were in a silent classroom trying to complete your exam papers , but  you cant concentrate because you cant breath and no matter how many times you try to cure it by using tissue it will be just as worse as using those paradox medications.

Finally when I reached  year 6 and became 11  I was allowed to take the operation. one week before I did the operation the NHS gave me a letter. they said to me that for the next couple of days i am not allowed to eat any sort of food  that is highly rated with calories. so all i ate was fruit , i drank a lot of water and tried to discover all sorts of foods that didn’t have a lot of sugar, salt fat and all sorts of unhealthy chemicals and powders. two days later they gave me another letter. they said to me that today i wasn’t allowed to eat any sort of food whether it had 20 calories or less. Although i was  allowed to have  just  a little bit of water. they took it so seriously that they had to give me a syringe.

after i took the operation i had an instant nose bleed but  that didn’t really bother me. The doctors in Chelsea and Westminster hospital told me that for maybe a month or two i would gain a lot of mucus but I wasn’t allowed to spit it out . They told me that I had to swallow it. The reason they told me this is because although when you usually produce mucus you are supposed to spit it out but, the mucus I was producing had so much blood inside it that you could even see it. So if i spat it out then i was just wasting my blood.

Finally a couple of weeks later all of the mucus went, my nose stopped bleeding and i was able  to breath just like anybody else. So by the time i reached secondary school which s now in the London Nautical school i was able to breathe just like my classmates and nobody would have noticed that everything i have just told you now has happened. I hope that you have enjoyed everything i told you but there was one more thing i forgot to tell you. They said to me it may come back.

Thank you for reading my short story (the operation) and  hope you have enjoyed it.

THE END

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