You three come at once so thou knows who shall love thi the most. Whoever is to convince thi the most shall earn half of the land from the kingdom. Starting from Goneril and so on, all of you shall tell thi doth love us most.
Goneril
Oh my ever so magnificent lord; i love you more than words wield the matter. Dearer than eye sight,space,liberty. Beyond what can be valued rich nor rare. Though i am in a love that miraculously vanishes breath and speech. Within every living creature and object that lives on not only this planet but galaxy , i am in deep magical love.
King Lear
And so what shall the other sister of thi say to mwa?
Regan
Oh my one and ever only love ,Lear . I am in a miraculous sot of love with you my dear. My sister is a great female and would be quite a hard choice. The only problem throughout this is that only she comes to short.It should not be that hard for you my one and only lord to choose between me and my unwanted sister shant it.
King Lear
And what shall you say to draw a third more opulent than your sisters. Speak at once before you are sentenced nothing but dust.
Cordelia
My magnificent lord i absolutely love you in a way that does not have to be explained to thi for you to understand.
King Lear
What are you trying to define to me? That i am a waste of breath for being explained to? You must speak very quickly young lady before i am to get my guards to cut your body into pork belly chops. SPEAK AT ONCE!!
Cordeila
Now my lord you are to listen to me very carefully, for you are thinking of what i said to you as a very disgraceful comment. My one and only wealthy highness , you should understand that no matter what you shall do to to me i will never take it as an offence. When i am to say to you that i shall have nothing to say to explain your divine intelligence , you are to take that as a compliment. I do not need to explain to you my amazing love for that will take as long as it is for you and i to lose our souls.
regan cordeila goneril . Shakespeares essay
Now this essay was suppose to be about these three sisters that fell in love with one king named lear. Now when i sal love , i don’t mean no puppy love or deep love. I sort of mean goldigga love. Whoever king lear thinks has defined their love a spectacular way will earn as much land they want from the kings kingdom. The three selfish young women do not understand the meaning of love and would rather try in a way humiliate eachother. For there is only one that is in true love. With the language shakespeare has used he tried to define each of their attitudes on the way they proposed to him and so that is the story.
isaac idris
February 19, 2016 at 8:43 pm
Isaac, this is a good start to a challenging task. I am confused about your ending though. Is this a different piece of work?
Targets:
1) At the moment, you are translating the text too literally. This means that the scene doesn’t flow as well as the original. Try to make the conversation more natural between the four characters.
2) You need to add a new context to the scene. At the moment, I am not sure where the scene is taking place or what exactly is being divided. Be imaginative and then make your decision clear in the speech between the characters.